Real Odimer's Stories

KaPaG nAbAsAg aNg pUsO….
HInDi MAlAkAs GaYa nG iSaNg PAsAboG…..
pWeDeNg kAsiNG HiNa Ng nAlAglAg nA DaHon..
Na aNg MaSaKiT….
IkAw lAnG AnG NaKakAriNiG…
Minsan, hirap din pala
magpahalaga sa isang tao..
yun tipong lagi ka andyan para sa kanya,
kasama sa gitna ng gyera,
karamay sa problema..
Tapos 1 araw, magigising ka na lang…
iniwan ka rin pala!!!

Tom: I would describe me as the really nice, cutie Georg: Cutie Tom: Beautiful, mm, yeah Bill: Boy Tom: Fabulous boy Bill: You know, I think is better when we describe, you know, I describe Georg. Tom: Okey. Bill: He’s a bit, Georg is a bit lazy Tom: Lazy, clumsy Georg: *sigh* Bill:And he’s, you know, he’s always too late, and he likes to Georg: That’s bullshit Tom: He’s really funny Bill: Yeah, because he’s clumsy. And Gustav, is, you know, is hard to find the word in English.I would say bitchy but I don’t know if is the right word. Tom: You can’t say, so you should be careful when you talk to Gustav because you can’t say anything negative about him because he’s getting very bitchy then Gustav: Totally bullshit Tom: Is the truth. And Bill Georg: Is egoistic. Tom: Egoistic, egoistic. Is it the right word? Georg: Yeah Tom: Egoistic.mm..yeah Interviewer: Selfish. You guys wanna defend yourselves? Tom: Defend? Georg: No Tom: Because they know is the truth. Bill: You know, I think, you know, they’re just a little bit, they say egoistic, because I don’t,you know, walk around with their cases, you know, with the instruments, I just have to have my mic and you know that’s why I’m the singer, so I’m happy about that. I’m not egoistic, I’m just Georg: There are a lot of more things. Tom: The instruments Georg: There are a lot of more things. That’s not

Tip 4: Conclusion—The Loop
We would sometimes want to go back.
Usually, when we finally get to survive starting our writeup, we write on and on to the point that we don’t know how to end it. The loop is one answer to the problem.
The loop is all about trying to connect the last part of your writeup back to the first by agreeing or contradicting with it. Somehow, this creates a cycle. It makes your writeup a circle that your readers will say something like, “Oh! That’s why this was said in the beginning.” This, for me, puts any writeup into a direction. You don’t end it hanging. No open-ended holes to fill in. You go back to where you started. You end your writeup with your readers’ minds all clear.
You do the loop in two ways:
Back-to-title loop - Here, you connect your concluding sentence to your title. It clears out why you used that title in the first place. Agreement Bagong Pinoy (Concluding sentence: Bagong Pinoy, mabuhay ka!)
Something is always meant to go wrong somewhere (Conclusing sentence: Something is always meant to go wrong somewhere until you learn.)
Contradiction
Dramas and the chances you are not allowed to take (Concluding sentence: Probably, everyone, dramatic or not, deserve some chance, too.) Back-to-lead loop - Obviously, you connect your concluding sentence to your lead or introduction. This is particularly applicable when you are to use punch, one-word, question, or quotation lead (see Tip 3). Agreement Pit of Despair
Introduction: Again, something was dead wrong, and this time, with me.
Conclusion: Something is wrong with me, and I am working on it. Would you mind waiting a bit? (although the last sentence asks for a response, making it open ended)
On Cliffhangers
Introduction: I was right.
Conclusion: I was right to make a move than wait without doing anything. It was, after all, the best and right thing to do.
Contradiction
Tumblrology Stints
Introduction: Somehow, I have to escape.
Conclusion: At first, all I wanted was to escape my stagnant life. Now, all I want is to escape tumblr. The looping process may come in your own special style, as your style in writing is something not taught. It is an innate capability. Again, I am here to share what I usually do without trying to sound like I am the best writer. It is just fine to share what you know no matter how little it is, right?
Eventually, by choice, we could go back to where we started.